it was a bit too rushed to finish…there’s more of a storyline if given the time to develop… but the jist was there. But the art and the tentacle sex were fire.
this was really nice! i love muscular bottom and naive looking tops! though i agree the storyline was not good enough. but it was a short story so i guess this is only normal for short stories
this is one of the best bl! the story isn’t the best but good enough.. Howver, truly one of the best feminine seme bl stories! i love it,, tysm for uploading.. will really appreciate more of this in the future
Kikobunny
Pas mal , I’ll be here again
zx3728
boring tbh
Xiaoyi
Bleumoon
it was a bit too rushed to finish…there’s more of a storyline if given the time to develop… but the jist was there. But the art and the tentacle sex were fire.
Sinu
My a&& came here to re-read again
hande
this was really nice! i love muscular bottom and naive looking tops!
though i agree the storyline was not good enough. but it was a short story so i guess this is only normal for short stories 
Tamari
Short and sweet, Your grandson is mine had my laughing
AlouA
this is one of the best bl! the story isn’t the best but good enough.. Howver, truly one of the best feminine seme bl stories! i love it,, tysm for uploading.. will really appreciate more of this in the future
Mask_
It could be better but it’s not bad. I’m not reading it again